Thursday, August 19, 2010

...Here I come up with my 2nd Poem ::- "No One Cares!" Feedback please???













No One Cares!

It was 26/11 Wednesday,
when Kasab and crew made their way.
They came, they entered, they broke,
still we say, our spirit, unity, security are not a joke!

Some were dead, some could survive,
and some are physically alive.
But we still possess fear,
when the gunshot sound passes through the ear!

As sun rises and sets day by day,
we tried to keep the horror at bay.
People got back to the chore, connected to life,
by criticizing our politicians, system which is rife!

And then the day came of change,
where I had expected abundant revenge.
I voted, poor, aged, celebs voted for Divine,
because we're the one who can change the India's design!

Chapter doesn't end here,
forget the country, Mumbai got only 44% votes near.
Country's Election booths were abandoned,
educated, rich and successful, core criticizer were deadened!

Simply they embarks, they attacks, they dies,
and we blames, criticizes and divides.
We forget every chaos, calling it our Spirit,
which gives trigger to their gun's bullet!

The Title says,'No One Cares!'
Let's change it and take one step towards bugbears!

My 1st Poem: Rider of the Life- LUCK!

P.S. : Please do comment because it feels nice when someone appreciate the crap you deliver! (Laughs) Thank you! :)